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Friday, 3 August 2018
Marine Reserve
In this writing I was writing an recount, hope you enjoy my story.
Kia ora, I am Aleasha from Matawai School. I really liked that you told me were you where and what you were doing. I loved you drawing of the crab. I learnt that you seen lots of sea animals like seaweed,fish,coral,crayfish, Pippies and muscles.
Maybe you could tell me why you were going to the beach. If you would like to see my learning visit my blog matawaialeashaa.blogspot.com
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Kia ora, I am Aleasha from Matawai School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked that you told me were you where and what you were doing. I loved you drawing of the crab.
I learnt that you seen lots of sea animals like seaweed,fish,coral,crayfish,
Pippies and muscles.
Maybe you could tell me why you were going to the beach.
If you would like to see my learning visit my blog matawaialeashaa.blogspot.com
Mā te wā
Aleasha