Tuesday, 3 December 2019
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Kia Ora Charlie
ReplyDeleteThis is Charlotte from the Summer Learning Journey program. I really enjoyed reading your christmas poem/rap! I think that the way you used rhyming words enhanced the poem and made it very interesting for the reader.
One of my favourite things about christmas day is all the food we get to eat! I see that you also wrote about food in your poem/rap, what is your favourite thing to eat on christmas day?
When looking at your writing I noticed that you have included an address on this letter, and while that would be super important if you were posting the letter, it's important to be careful with your personal information when you're posting online. If this is your real address, could you please edit your post and use a made-up address e.g. Christmas Road
Ngā mihi maioha
Charlotte